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I clicked on this image because it says it wanted a critique on the side on the screen, but I don't see anywhere on here to make sure. If you didn't want one, then oh well. If this is a creature then he is probably fairly symmetrical. right now his calf spikes are different on each side. It's not a big deal as a drawing, but if someone where to try and render this is 3d, they would have to make some guesses about which leg to use. His left leg looks like tibia and bends, if that was intentional, then make it feel that way. Right now it looks like a mistake. His right leg are where most of the problems are. The spikes on his calf are not evenly spaced. Also I am confused. His calf spikes look and his heel don't work with each other. The spikes make an ellipse suggesting that his leg is going away from us, and his foot is a straight profile. If the spikes are supposed to be in a a 'saddle' shape then push it. I just noticed this thing was done 3 years ago. Congrats to cghub for putting this on the side. I hope some of this is applicable but in 3 years you should be way beyond this. -evan
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